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Melodramatic
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Joined: 04 Feb 2003
Posts: 4577
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 Mon Jun 16, 2003 4:57 pm Roses Are Red |
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My poem is below...and it does not rime so please tell me homestly if you like it. Even if you dont then just say that.
Roses Are Red.....
Roses are red
Violets are blue
If ya see a shooting star
Make a good wish for who ya love
Love is from above; where heaven is located
Even if ya may sometimes get fustrated
Love has a ring too it
Its either in your heart
Ringing like church bells, or on your finger
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jonathan95
Delta Prime
Joined: 29 Oct 2002
Posts: 1544
Location: UK Newcastle
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| Mon Jun 16, 2003 5:11 pm |
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thats very nice. I am not much of a poem buff or anything but its prity cool, and your not that bad, trust me u havnt seen mein yet lol  .
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Lxe
keep dreaming
Joined: 11 Aug 2002
Posts: 3622
Location: stv
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| Mon Jun 16, 2003 5:12 pm |
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Beta Read
Roses are red
Violets are blue
If ya see a shooting star
Make a good wish for who ya love
Love is from above; where heaven is located
Love has a ring too it
Its either in your heart, or on your finger
Ringing like church bells,
Even if ya may sometimes get frustrated
it rhymes now that I wrote it  
Just messing with you Dana. I love it girl.
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Melodramatic
Rear Admiral
Joined: 04 Feb 2003
Posts: 4577
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| Mon Jun 16, 2003 5:14 pm |
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Lol thank you 
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Marina Sirtis
Lieutenant
Joined: 19 Apr 2003
Posts: 138
Location: I am in a room, with lights.
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| Mon Jun 16, 2003 7:35 pm |
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Nice poem Dana
You should add more to it But its really nice
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Melodramatic
Rear Admiral
Joined: 04 Feb 2003
Posts: 4577
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| Tue Jun 17, 2003 10:13 am |
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Thanks Marina
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sabertooth1217
UPN Boycotter
Joined: 21 Jun 2003
Posts: 11484
Location: Texas
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| Fri Jun 27, 2003 3:24 pm |
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thats pretty good. it rhymes also
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Melodramatic
Rear Admiral
Joined: 04 Feb 2003
Posts: 4577
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| Fri Jun 27, 2003 3:28 pm |
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Awww, thank you
I am trying to write another one, but its not going good.
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sabertooth1217
UPN Boycotter
Joined: 21 Jun 2003
Posts: 11484
Location: Texas
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| Fri Jun 27, 2003 3:36 pm |
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i cant write anything like that here it goes lol
cats and dogs are sweet
every one wants to have one
they all have lots to eat
but some have to save coins
so that they can have enough to buy
a very own cat or dog
so that every one doesnt sigh
cause they didnt buy a hog
and every one wiull have some fun time
lol like?
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Melodramatic
Rear Admiral
Joined: 04 Feb 2003
Posts: 4577
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| Fri Jun 27, 2003 10:09 pm |
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Its very nice
But when you plan about writting about something it helps.
I am not trying to insult you or anything. The Poem is great.
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Voy_Girl
Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002
Posts: 8302
Location: Fair Haven
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| Sun Jun 29, 2003 5:08 am |
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These are just... making me speechless!
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Melodramatic
Rear Admiral
Joined: 04 Feb 2003
Posts: 4577
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| Fri Jul 04, 2003 10:36 am |
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Lol.
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ussshorty
Commodore
Joined: 30 Aug 2002
Posts: 1678
Location: in space,in the middle of nowhere
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| Sun Jul 06, 2003 3:14 am |
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i love it dana,star quality. 
im posting mine but if you dont like it delete it.
roses are red
spiders are blck
you cheat on me
and ill brake your
back.
im such a nice person
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Melodramatic
Rear Admiral
Joined: 04 Feb 2003
Posts: 4577
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| Sun Jul 06, 2003 2:22 pm |
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^ LOL.
Its funny....something that B'Elanna would say
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