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Voy_Girl
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| Chakotays Angel wrote: | No its not going to be a holographic baby  The Hirogens are on the planet looking for a prey that got away from them. |
And the Voy crew is so lucky to be on the same place at the same time... 
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Chakotays Angel
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| Wed Mar 19, 2003 7:22 pm |
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A small part of the section.....
“B’Elanna are you ok.” Tom cried out as he ran toward her. B’Elanna looked around to see who was calling her name. Tom was about to grab her arm when all of the sudden he was struck from behind by Seven with a rock.
Any one have any ideas on how seven will say she is sorry?
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janewaykat
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| Wed Mar 19, 2003 8:08 pm |
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good job! (nope I'm a horrible writer  )
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Thomas
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| Thu Mar 20, 2003 11:12 am |
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 We'll have to wait and see.
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Voy_Girl
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| Thu Mar 20, 2003 3:33 pm |
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Good... 7 starts crying like a little girl... j/k  (NEVERMIND that!!)
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PicardsTrueLove
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| Mon Mar 24, 2003 10:48 am |
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Seven becomes self destructive b/c she can't say sorry and turns her guilt inward: Janeway has to snap her out of it. (just a thought)
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Chakotays Angel
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| Wed Mar 26, 2003 2:42 pm |
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Here's alittle more
Seven, why in the hell did you do that to Tom?” B’Elanna yelled. “I thought he was another Hirogen coming to attack you.” Seven replied through her tears .B’Elanna replied back” Dose he look like one of those killers to you.” “No.” replied seven in a whisper. B”Elanna then reached and touched seven on the arm an spoke “ I forgive you ,for hitting Tom on the head beside you did something that I felt like doing to him for months.” Seven started to laugh as she looked down at Tom’s body that lay at her feet. Chakotay and Kathryn came down to where the two women were kneeling over Tom’s body.
Sorry been working on other things
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Voy_Girl
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| Wed Mar 26, 2003 3:30 pm |
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Need more of this story...
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Thomas
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| Thu Mar 27, 2003 11:16 am |
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I like it.
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janewaykat
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| Thu Mar 27, 2003 7:47 pm |
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^ me too
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| Thu Mar 27, 2003 8:57 pm |
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keep on writing i can't write stories im just a lowly poet
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Chakotays Angel
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| Tue Apr 08, 2003 1:27 pm |
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I'm sorry for this being so late just alot has happen to me in the past few weeks. Please enjoy 
" He is going to have one hell of a head ache.” Chakotay said as he handed Kathryn the Tricorder. Kathryn kneeled asking B’Elanna to give her a hand by supporting Tom’s head will she scanned him. Tom was starting coming to as Kathryn was finishing the medical scan. Chakotay asked Tom “Do you remember what happen to you?” “I remember running toward B’Elanna then feeling something hit me behind the head.” Tom replied as he got up off the ground. Seven was about to say something to Tom but Kathryn stopped her. “Why don’t the rest of you go back to camp, I want to talk to Seven for abit alone?’’ Kathryn said with a worried tone. “Are you sure it is safe for the two of you to be alone out here?” Replied Chakotay as he placed his hand on Kathryn shoulder.
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| Tue Apr 08, 2003 4:08 pm |
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^loooooooooooovvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeee ittttttttttt
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Chakotays Angel
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| Tue Apr 08, 2003 6:24 pm |
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Thanks
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janewaykat
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| Tue Apr 08, 2003 6:37 pm |
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^wannnnttttt moooorrreee!!!!!!!!!Very good
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PicardsTrueLove
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| Tue Apr 08, 2003 6:48 pm |
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lol Yay! he he more more more!!
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Thomas
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| Wed Apr 09, 2003 10:21 am |
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Nice.
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Voy_Girl
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| Wed Apr 09, 2003 1:21 pm |
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..Finally a new part.
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Chakotays Angel
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| Fri Apr 11, 2003 7:27 pm |
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more for you to read,
Seven looked at her commanding officer and spoke “Commander there is no need to worry about the Captain.” Chakoaty replied back to seven; “Anything happens to her, I’ll confine myself to the Brig.’’Kathryn replied “Chakotay, if anything happens you will hear us screaming!” “What is she pregnant or something?” said B’Elanna in a joking tone. Everyone turned to look at B’Elanna with a shocking expression.
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janewaykat
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| Fri Apr 11, 2003 8:48 pm |
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...and the plot thickens very good
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PicardsTrueLove
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| Sat Apr 12, 2003 11:52 am |
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^^Discovery!!!!
| Chakotays Angel wrote: | | I'm sorry for this being so late just alot has happen to me in the past few weeks. Please enjoy |
What's going on honey?
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Chakotays Angel
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| Sat Apr 12, 2003 3:56 pm |
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It was just a few things that were going crazy.
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Chakotays Angel
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| Sun Apr 13, 2003 4:07 pm |
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new for my fans......
“To be honesty B’Elanna, Yes I’m pregnant!” Kathryn replied. Tom slapped Chakotay on the back and said, “Congratulations Chief, never thought of you as the fatherhood type?” B’Elanna said “Oh I’m so happy for the both of you.” as she gave Kathryn a big hug. “Captain, I wish you and the Commander well with the baby.” said Seven. “Seven, you can call me and Commander by our first names.” Kathryn said as she took Seven’s hands in hers.
more to come later
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janewaykat
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| Sun Apr 13, 2003 4:27 pm |
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Great Job!!!
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Voy_Girl
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| Mon Apr 14, 2003 1:43 pm |
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Very nice addition...
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