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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
  Joined: 04 Nov 2002 Posts: 776 Location: Twin Falls Idaho
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				 Mon Dec 16, 2002 2:17 pm    Poem of Love and Pain | 
			 
			
				
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				 I wrote this poem after watching Resolutions for first time. Please tell me what you think of it. Any comments or ideas on changes would be of most help to me   
 
                                 
 
                                 Masks of Desire 
 
  
 
             Why must I hide my love for you behind this masquerade of
 
                            Protocol and Regulations,
 
 
               My heart calls your name but dies away because of
 
                          Pain from pushing you away,
 
 
                  I want to feel your gentle loving touch again upon 
 
                                           My body
 
 
           But these masks that I wear over my heart conceals the desire 
 
                             That is burning in my soul for you.
 
 
 
 
 
 
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		Voy_Girl Admiral
  
  Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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				 Mon Dec 16, 2002 3:00 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				Lovely  
 
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Don't Create Your Own Shadows
 
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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
  Joined: 04 Nov 2002 Posts: 776 Location: Twin Falls Idaho
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				 Mon Dec 16, 2002 4:43 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				 Thanks Voy_Girl    
 
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		Voy_Girl Admiral
  
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				 Tue Dec 17, 2002 3:42 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				  You're welcome... Got any other poems?  
 
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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
  Joined: 04 Nov 2002 Posts: 776 Location: Twin Falls Idaho
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				 Wed Dec 18, 2002 12:23 am     | 
			 
			
				
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				[b] b] Here you go
 
Hearts of Ice
 
 
Hearts on fire with passion can quickly turn cold as night becomes day 
 
 
Hearts filled with love can quickly turn cruel as 
 
Months becomes years
 
 
Hearts that instruct with honor can quickly turn ruthless as strength becomes weakness
 
 
Hearts of ice are all that is left of you and I.
 
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		Voy_Girl Admiral
  
  Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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				 Wed Dec 18, 2002 8:43 am     | 
			 
			
				
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				VER y  nice!  
 
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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
  Joined: 04 Nov 2002 Posts: 776 Location: Twin Falls Idaho
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				 Wed Dec 18, 2002 6:30 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				Thanks   
 
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		shrek man Whiz Kid
  
  Joined: 14 Jan 2002 Posts: 5519
 
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				 Wed Dec 18, 2002 7:39 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				Very nice.  
 
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		Voy_Girl Admiral
  
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				 Thu Dec 19, 2002 3:56 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				I like your poems Chakotays angel....  
 
 
what inspires you?
 
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		Thomas Pool Princess
  
  Joined: 08 Jul 2001 Posts: 19730 Location: Manchester
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				 Thu Dec 19, 2002 3:59 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				They're great.  
 
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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
  Joined: 04 Nov 2002 Posts: 776 Location: Twin Falls Idaho
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				 Fri Dec 20, 2002 2:15 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				 Voy_Girl,  What inspires me to write  poems is the love and the hardships of life in the world. I wrote these poems as if they were from Janeway point of view. I'm glad you like my poems and will post a new one really soon.      
  Last edited by Chakotays Angel on Fri Dec 20, 2002 2:24 pm; edited 1 time in total
 
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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
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				 Fri Dec 20, 2002 2:23 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				Here is a  new one that I wrote last night after I watched Coda.
 
 
	Magic of love 	
 
 
       Love has a very special magic
 
 
  Two hearts that have never touched 
 
         Are brought together
 
 
 Two souls that yearn to be together 
 
        Are joined together 
 
 
   Two lovers that burn with passion
 
         Are untied together 
 
 
     Love has the power of Magic
 
       Flowing threw it.
 
 
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		Thomas Pool Princess
  
  Joined: 08 Jul 2001 Posts: 19730 Location: Manchester
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				 Fri Dec 20, 2002 2:28 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				Yay! We love J/C!!!  
 
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		Voy_Girl Admiral
  
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				 Fri Dec 20, 2002 3:32 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				 	  | Chakotays Angel wrote: | 	 		   Voy_Girl,  What inspires me to write  poems is the love and the hardships of life in the world. I wrote these poems as if they were from Janeway point of view. I'm glad you like my poems and will post a new one really soon.       | 	  
 
 
That's a good source of inspiration...   I hope you write many more of the same quality as you uphold now  
 
 
I like your newest piece too, btw!
 
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		-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
 
  Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126
 
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				 	  | chocho_11 wrote: | 	 		  Yay! We love J/C!!!   | 	  
 
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  [First Time back online in 3 years]
 
 
For i dipped into the future
 
Far as the human eye could see
 
Saw the vision of the world
 
And all wonder that would be 
 
-Alfred Lord Tennyson [Quote on Voyager's dedication plaque]
 
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		Voy_Girl Admiral
  
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				 Sat Dec 21, 2002 4:06 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				^You too, VF?  
 
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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
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				 Mon Dec 23, 2002 5:47 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				 A new one    
 
               Moonlight on Roses
 
 
As the delicate rose buds bloom when kissed by a moon beam
 
 
As the gentle light caress the beautiful buds during a soft summer night
 
 
Only the moonlight and the gentle night can make these roses bloom to life
 
 
Just like your gentle touch makes my heart bloom with the love for you.
 
 
 
 
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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
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				 Mon Dec 23, 2002 5:49 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				 Another one    
 
 
Star crossed
 
 
Lovers who can’t be together 
 
 
Hearts that cry out for each other at night
 
 
Souls that burn with the fires of passion
 
 
Arms that arch to caress each others bodies
 
 
Died slowly in each others arms 
 
 
They are called Star crossed.
 
 
 
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		Voy_Girl Admiral
  
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				 Tue Dec 24, 2002 3:57 am     | 
			 
			
				
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				aww.... so very sweet these are!!  
 
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		Thomas Pool Princess
  
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				 Tue Dec 24, 2002 8:22 am     | 
			 
			
				
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				Very nice.  
 
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		Voy_Girl Admiral
  
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				 Wed Dec 25, 2002 3:19 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				hope there's many more...  
 
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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
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				 Thu Dec 26, 2002 5:40 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				 there will be many more real soon   
 
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		Voy_Girl Admiral
  
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				 Fri Dec 27, 2002 8:15 am     | 
			 
			
				
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				good   will be waiting..
 
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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
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				 Thu Jan 02, 2003 3:47 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				Here it is 
 
 
Angel Tears
 
 
The gentle rain falls upon my window pane
 
Winter snow swiral around my lonely heart
 
Dew drops dance on the petals of the last summer rose
 
You and I parted so saddly without a last kiss
 
Our love will live on forever in our lonely hearts 
 
Like Angel tears from Heaven.    
 
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		Chakotays Angel Captain
  
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				 Thu Jan 02, 2003 3:55 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				 one more 
 
 
 
Forever Goodbye to Our Love
 
 
 
You said the you would love me till the end
 
but now the end has come for us
 
I loved you with all my heart
 
but you shattered it like glass upon the ground
 
We parted so bitterly  towards each other
 
but now we know there was no really love for each other 
 
So Forever goodbye to our love   
 
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