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		Captain Patrick Commodore
  
  Joined: 06 Mar 2005 Posts: 2421
 
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				 Sat Jun 03, 2006 4:51 pm    LOI&S | 
			 
			
				
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Comments and Crics are welcomed!
 
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		Tuvok8917 Dutchie
  
  Joined: 15 May 2004 Posts: 4205 Location: On my way back home
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				 Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:47 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				Look's really cool! The water look's very real to me. If it wasn't a Ice world, i would take a dive!   Still, it is a great picture. Although, i don't like those mountains.. They look so flat....
 
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		Dracojastin Lieutenant, Junior Grade
  
  Joined: 13 May 2006 Posts: 102 Location: Holodeck 2 NL
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				 Sun Jun 04, 2006 4:37 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				I think you should pay more attention to detail
 
The water seems moving but you dont see any splash against the mountains.
 
And you clouds aren't realistic at all. I think you tried to define a focused area but that didnt come out that well. and parts of the clouds are infront of the mountains. It's just a detail thing that is missing.
 
It was the same in your previouse with the spaceship in it.
 
The shadowpart on the water surface was not realistic...
 
I think that if you would pay more attention to those details your pictures will look far more better than they do know... 
 
It's all in the details  
 
 
I hope to see more of you when you pay more attention to those details, because your pictures have potential to be very nice.
 
 
Succes with your new ones!
 
 
Draco
 
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		TrekkieMage Office Junkie
  
  Joined: 17 Oct 2004 Posts: 5335 Location: Hiding
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				 Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:13 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				I actually gasped audibly when I saw that. It is absolutely AMAZING. I think that may be one of your best pieces (aside from the one titled "starry", which I have as my desktop ^.^). I'm about ready to jump in that water...
 
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		Tuvok8917 Dutchie
  
  Joined: 15 May 2004 Posts: 4205 Location: On my way back home
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				 Mon Jun 05, 2006 12:23 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				 	  | TrekkieMage wrote: | 	 		  |  I'm about ready to jump in that water... | 	  
 
 
Don't! It's an ICE planet      
 
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		TrekkieMage Office Junkie
  
  Joined: 17 Oct 2004 Posts: 5335 Location: Hiding
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				 Mon Jun 05, 2006 8:24 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				When I posted it was blistering hot, my feet hurt, and I was exauhsted. Ice water would have felt great!  
 
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