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		AndrewBullock The Misguided One
  
  Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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				 Fri Mar 24, 2006 11:28 pm    Bucket of Poems {PG 13} | 
			 
			
				
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				Hey everyone. I decided to make a space for new poems I'm currently coming up with. If you have any comments please don't hold back. You may also voice your opinions as well.
 
 
   The upcoming one is of one I've just written. Really, it was used as a practice one, but hopefully through the course of my writings my ability will improve. Remember... my poems will continue to be posted on this thread.  
 
 
Amazon Dreams
 
By: Andrew J. Bullock
 
 
We wish upon stars
 
For destined desires 
 
And just when we get our hopes up
 
We fall in great fires
 
 
The witch with pigeons
 
The actor with billions
 
Sick twisted lies
 
Hurt us a zillion
 
 
Racists with power
 
Gunners go louder
 
Thugs with knifes
 
Lookin’ for lives
 
 
Rivers go crimson 
 
Now they glisten
 
Violence was taught 
 
And everyone fought
 
 
The musical of life
 
Seems like a fright
 
When really this night
 
Is just before the flight
 
 
Is killing all we understand? 
 
Is pain something we know how to man?  
 
A ten-year-old child
 
Just died in my hands
 
 
“Give me your money,” he says
 
And takes a knife in his hands
 
I offered my watch
 
But wanted my life instead
 
 
I now soar through the air
 
Watching all who really care
 
My Amazon dream
 
Is now my crime scene.
 
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		madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
  
  Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 5885 Location: Slough, England
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				 Mon Mar 27, 2006 2:26 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				 	  | Quote: | 	 		  Is killing all we understand? 
 
Is pain something we know how to man? 
 
A ten-year-old child 
 
Just died in my hands  | 	  
 
 
I'm seriously loving that verse
 
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		AndrewBullock The Misguided One
  
  Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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				 Fri Mar 31, 2006 7:58 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				 Again, another practice one.
 
 
Spark
 
Andrew J. Bullock
 
 
"I look to the stars 
 
Wishing for you to call
 
I miss you everyday
 
And I love you for your traits
 
 
A pain in my chest
 
A quicken in my blood
 
This is what happens
 
When I think of you
 
 
Is this a crush?
 
Is this a love?
 
I want you with me 
 
Desperation follows, you see
 
 
I pick up the phone
 
And dial your number
 
But quickly hang up
 
And fall in a slumber
 
 
I want you
 
But I can’t have you
 
I need you
 
But you don’t need me
 
 
Your personality is golden 
 
Your mind is solid 
 
A unique blend
 
All thanks to the molding
 
 
It feels like you’re so far away
 
When really you’re just next door
 
God, show me what I must do
 
To make this love so pure 
 
 
I continue looking out the window
 
Wishing upon a star
 
But as soon as I was ready to give up
 
I saw a flare shooting past Mars
 
 
Here we are sitting together 
 
And I finish reading your letter
 
You were afraid of what I’d say
 
So I kissed you, as it may
 
 
I’ve never seen a greater complexion 
 
Or a brighter spark of a flame
 
Together we walked off the sand
 
With my hand placed in yours
 
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		AndrewBullock The Misguided One
  
  Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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				 Sat Apr 22, 2006 11:22 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				Missing You
 
Andrew J. Bullock
 
 
 
We sit up talking late at nights
 
We made each other laugh
 
 
But I made a mistake
 
This cost us everything
 
 
You may not know it
 
But I still blame myself
 
 
And on some days
 
It even hurts 
 
 
We became great friends
 
But I let it go to far
 
 
Deep down inside 
 
I’m missing you terribly 
 
 
You wrote good stories
 
So I came to you for advice
 
 
And with your help
 
I’ve even bettered myself
 
 
You have your own life now
 
I understand that 
 
 
But I wonder what it’d be like 
 
To still be apart of it 
 
 
I’m missing the long talks
 
I’m missing the long walks
 
 
I’m missing the mystery 
 
You were so sisterly 
 
 
I still believe He sent you my way
 
But I’ve let you go
 
 
I feel like I’ve failed you
 
I wish things were normal
 
 
I’m really missing you…
 
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		Talking Rain Lieutenant Commander
  
  Joined: 18 Apr 2006 Posts: 265 Location: Canada
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				 Sun Apr 23, 2006 6:17 am     | 
			 
			
				
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				Oh my god! These are the best poems ever
 
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		AndrewBullock The Misguided One
  
  Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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				 Fri Apr 28, 2006 9:03 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				^^Thanks. They could use some work, but it's some what of a start. More coming soon!   
 
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