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		KateReba fan Lieutenant Commander
  
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				 Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:04 am    Unexpected Blessings | 
			 
			
				
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		StarfleetCommand74656 Captain
  
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				 Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:07 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				I keep trying to read it, it says i have to login?
 
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		KateReba fan Lieutenant Commander
  
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				 Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:42 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				sorry about that. try this link http://www.fanfiction.net/l/17/3/0/1/1/0/0/0/0/0/1/ 
 
 
otherwise you can look up by author. search for CanadianReba.
 
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		StarfleetCommand74656 Captain
  
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				 Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:59 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				It's a great plot, and well-written. The punctuation (or lack of same) lets it down in places, though.
 
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		KateReba fan Lieutenant Commander
  
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				 	  | StarfleetCommand74656 wrote: | 	 		  | It's a great plot, and well-written. The punctuation (or lack of same) lets it down in places, though. | 	  
 
 
Thank you for the comment. I admit i never have been very good at the grammar part. I usually go with the Word grammar check suggestions when it comes to punctuation.
 
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		Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
  
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				 Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:23 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				What I read is good so far. I put in my fun favorite places so I can go back to it whenever I get the chance to finish reading it.
 
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		Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
  
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				 Fri Jan 26, 2007 6:14 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				Update.
 
 
I finished reading it. It's really good.
 
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		KateReba fan Lieutenant Commander
  
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				 Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:16 am     | 
			 
			
				
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				 	  | Josi Rockholt wrote: | 	 		  Update.
 
 
I finished reading it. It's really good. | 	  
 
 
That's actually the whole story, i don't have anymore for that one.  I am planning on doing a Sequel to "Second Chances" that starts from when Janeway and crew get back to earth and how they have to deal with all the changes.
 
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		Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
  
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				 Mon Jan 29, 2007 4:48 pm     | 
			 
			
				
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				Sounds like a good plan.
 
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		KateReba fan Lieutenant Commander
  
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				I rewrote the final chapter since it seemed too rushed. Let me know what you think.
 
 
http://www.fanfiction.net/l/17/3/0/1/1/0/0/0/0/0/1/ 
 
 
otherwise you can look up by author. search for CanadianReba.
 
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