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GoldenChaka
Crewman
Joined: 16 Jan 2003
Posts: 2
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 Thu Jan 16, 2003 6:34 am Please Rate My Poem HONESTLY |
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Destroying Your Love
Raindrops of lonely heaven from your eyes
Deafening silence of your bleeding heart
And a gentle slap of your finger on my face
Were the hands that drove me way
Distance is heaven and earth
Bond as feeble as waning candle
With forgiveness trapped in oblivion
All my hopes abandoned me
Don’t pity my heart that tore you apart
But destroy the memories that kept you down
Then listen to my heart that beseeches forgiveness
Now solicit an answer from yours
Asking whether to love me again or not
..What do you think of my poem, please rate on a scale of 1 to 10, with 10 being the higheste. Be honest, and put some comments on it.
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Valathous
The Canadian, eh
Joined: 31 Aug 2002
Posts: 19074
Location: Centre Bell
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| Thu Jan 16, 2003 6:53 pm |
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its a good poem 
id give it an 8.5 
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lonedragon33
Commander
Joined: 09 May 2002
Posts: 386
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| Fri Jan 17, 2003 5:10 am |
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i give it a 7, good work
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closeness is eternal
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Robin
Vice Admiral
Joined: 14 Oct 2002
Posts: 5618
Location: USS Negatis
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| Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:15 pm |
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It sucks. It gets a negative 5. joking...
Nice.. 8 points
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A Man without religion is like a fish without a bicycle.
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Voy_Girl
Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002
Posts: 8302
Location: Fair Haven
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| Sat Jan 18, 2003 3:09 pm |
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Good Around 8, I'd say 
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Don't Create Your Own Shadows
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